Rachel Nichols


A Magical Day


I am truly enchanted with this day
there are messages of love
from poets and poetesses far away
then there is the sun- my love
In this big baby blue sky
bringing me so much happiness
I smile and I sigh
what else can I say or do
today is most fabulous, yes it's true
the weather is clear and bright
laying low on the horizon
are streaks of clouds, frothy white
mother nature planned a special show
the moon is here, bathing in the sunlight,
beholding the beauty of nature
for he cannot see it in the night
the tree maidens wear pretty gowns
In colours of orange, red, gold and green
dance and swirl with the morning breeze
this is a most enchanting, delightful scene
oh my close your eyes, what a sight!
some tree maidens are undressing
for the sun and moon's delight
the moon kisses me goodbye
after this spectacular show
then I am left to bathe
in the sun's loving glow

Submitted: Wednesday, November 27, 2013
Edited: Friday, December 20, 2013

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Originally Submitted: Thursday, November 08,2012
Edited: Friday, November 09,2012
Comments about this poem (A Magical Day by Rachel Nichols)

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Robert Beck
(12/31/2012 1: 15: 00 AM)

Ah the magic of this poem made my day, excellent

Thank you

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Thomas Hsi
(12/22/2012 11: 40: 00 PM)

A beautiful and descriptive representation of a magical day in an enchanting world. I completely agree with your followers. Please never stop writing!

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Heather Wilson
(12/20/2012 6: 35: 00 PM)

You really made it sound a very magical day, may you have many more to come. a lovely write.

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Owain Glyn
(12/18/2012 6: 18: 00 AM)

You clearly have the innate ability to see the beauty in everything, this is a rare gift, never lock it away for safekeeping but always keep it close.

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isam Abdelrahman
(11/23/2012 1: 46: 00 AM)

Quite fascinating fairy-like cyber. enormous child heart speaks! great writing

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Caroline Bulleck
(11/21/2012 6: 54: 00 PM)

I like the imagery and flow of it all. Truly a magical day.

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Babatunde Aremu
(11/14/2012 9: 25: 00 AM)

The poem takes the read mind on a fascinating excursion. Great write. I like it

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Vijay Sai R
(11/11/2012 10: 23: 00 PM)

its like getting into a new sunbath...beautiful

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Valsa George
(11/10/2012 2: 25: 00 AM)

We the elders bow before this young sunprincess! ! Sprouting talent, getting perfected day by day! ! Great! !

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Thomas A Robinson
(11/10/2012 1: 36: 00 AM)

Simply magical and the poem also

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Hari Halder
(11/9/2012 9: 37: 00 PM)

Ah! so cool! Love your flash of thought. You made moment here eternal.

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Jahan Zeb
(11/9/2012 6: 45: 00 AM)

You smile and the whole nature seems to be smiling. You are amazing Sunprincess. You can write anything. You can beautify a little think and make it sublime. I really wish you the best of luck.

And one more I read your poem in the evening. I wish I had done so in the daylight.

Day it is my dear. Thanks for writing such a poem

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Sindiswa S. Mnguni C'ndy
(11/9/2012 3: 06: 00 AM)

WOW! this is a nice tribute thanks man and here its sunny, birds are singing just nice looking at the nature and just feels right to write you know....hmm let me get on to it now now good write girl...enjoyed it alot.... THE MOON KISSES ME GOODBYE AFTER THIS SPECTACULAR SHOW.....lyk it..kip well friend!

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Lyn Paul
(11/9/2012 2: 39: 00 AM)

Absolutely beautiful Rachel, such talent. Thank You

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Payal Parande
(11/9/2012 1: 58: 00 AM)

oh! mam how wonderful i was living the dream when i read this magical piece......i read all the poems the great poet wrote on you and i don't have any idea what you are going through but i wish you never let go of your shine

the shine that always make people smile make me smile...i love you mam

and you are my princess

love

payal

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Kelly Seale
(11/8/2012 11: 04: 00 PM)

Oh such beauty cries, the sunprincess dances- naked, with the tree maidens,
On such a beautiful, magical day... the sunprincess has come out to
play.
Oh bewitching one, why have you cast such a delightful spell?
I am bedazzled, frazzeled, and a bit perplexed,
Will you ever take me into you confidience?
Only time will tell.

Great Ink Rachel... as you can see... you inspire me! lol.; -)

-Kelly.

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Greg Uhan
(11/8/2012 8: 39: 00 PM)

It truly was, thank you for capturing it, the beauty will passed down and shared for generations to come.

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  • Freshman - 1,635 Points Lyn Paul (11/30/2013 10:43:00 AM)

    Your magic talent is remarkable. A true princess you are. I Hope You See This Rachel/ (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,369 Points Patricia Grantham (11/30/2013 9:23:00 AM)

    Your poem is really very beautiful. It really lit up my day.
    As I was reading it line after line I could feel my heart
    and mind taken up to lofty heights of gladness. Very uplifting,
    inspiring and delightfully sweet. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 24 Points Dee Corpolongo (11/28/2013 2:58:00 AM)

    Wonderfully described and enjoyed the show brought to my mind.
    Excellent poem about Nature and it's beauty. Loved this! . (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,252 Points Valerie Dohren (11/27/2013 12:40:00 PM)

    A magical poem Rachel, filled with the beauty of your imagination, and also of reality I am sure. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 931 Points Kanav Justa (11/27/2013 12:13:00 PM)

    ... this one blew my mind.... it really did...
    Will read this one again sometime.. (Report) Reply

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