A Loving Dad Poem by chidiebere franklin

A Loving Dad

Rating: 4.5


I wish I had my dad by my side
Just thinking of him makes me cry
Never being able to get to know him
Hurts me inside everyday that goes by
The stories I hear
To my eyes they bring a tear
Before I had to say good-bye
I wish with him I had more time
My mom lets me know how much he cared
Since I was too young to have my own memories to share
Seeing pictures of him I want to know
Why so soon he had to go
Good things that he did to help someone else
Hearing about that just makes my heart melt
I just hoped that the time with him could have been longer
Because I know he was a loving husband and father
I am sad that we are apart
I miss my dad with all my heart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hans Vr 16 July 2010

This is a very good poem. Full of feeling, great verses. I pray for your strength.

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David Beckham 16 July 2010

Okay, ...this is a 10/10..absolutely fantastic. Everything element captured with great vivid details! Excellent. loved it

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So heartfelt! An amazing emotional write straight from the heart. My father died when I was two..never knew him..So enjoyed; D

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