A Love Story - In Making Poem by Deepthi Vincent

A Love Story - In Making



He woke up into a dream
With two little purple wings
And fluttered in the blue sky
Feeling so light and free

Naughty lily winked at him
Daisy gave a knowing smile
Pretty poppy called with a nod
Gosh! He got confused

Then he caught a glimpse of her
Behind the lush green leaves
A jasmine, so pure and fragile
Cupid's arrow struck him hard

With deep desire to gain her love
He circled her longingly
Though little scared and shy
She opened her heart for him

Their union so divine
Opened the doors of heaven
Angels showered blessings
Everything seemed forever

Staring blankly at the cocoon wall
He tried to solve the mystery
'Where are my wings?
Where is my love? '

Slowly, cleared the fog
Reality sank into him
It was just another dream
A dream about glorious tomorrow

He's a pupa, waiting to be a butterfly
A growing bud, she's yet to bloom
A love story in making stage
Beautiful are the ways of Nature

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Binish Cd 04 January 2012

really a wonderful expression of words.........

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Diwakar Bhatt 02 July 2011

observant eye of a poet to catch nature's glory where beautiful things keep happening............................

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Shalini Samuel 18 October 2010

Very well written... Starting lines and the title made me so curious about this Love Story... The way you broke the suspense at the end was splendid...

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 12 July 2010

‘Their union so divine Opened the doors of heaven Angels showered blessings Everything seemed forever’ ~ Please don’t wake me from dream type poem for me…. ‘He’s a pupa, waiting to be a butterfly’ ~ Wow butterfly with kaleidoscopic platy of colors …love it…. Thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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