A Love Song By The Star Poem by Gordon Tseng

A Love Song By The Star

Rating: 4.1


Singing a love song, wandering in that peaceful and lonely night,
The blinking star lets his touching notes take a ride with the moonlight.
To thank the moon for her fan-like listening, her generous free flight,
The notes dance on the black sleepy ocean, make it excited and silver white.


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elena Sandu 21 February 2012

Wow a beautiful little story, loving image of dancing notes and silver white ocean, thank you!

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Wahab Abdul 29 February 2012

well said and well crafted piece of poetry. I like it.

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Shahzia Batool 29 February 2012

what celestial merry-making! it's an allegory with sensuousness! a feast for imagination! but naturally one is tempted to ask...why this four line composition? ? ?

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Gordon Tseng 05 March 2012

Please read my poem QUASI-QUATRAIN for the answer of the question below.

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Besa Dede 06 March 2012

Beautiful poem! Singing a love song, wandering in that peaceful and lonely night, The blinking star lets his touching notes take a ride with the moonlight. Wonderful creation, and beautifully described setting!

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Soulful Heart 03 January 2013

the words surely glide through the miles in tranquil beauty......

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 26 November 2012

A wondrous love poem with nature's magical gifts presented with d poet's pen.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 12 September 2012

you are so good especially when you write about the moon

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yellowbell alamanda 07 September 2012

The poem was like a shallow then deep shore line..Wanderous. A soul's craddle.

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Unwritten Soul 05 September 2012

The poem felt so good to feel, and the title, i loved it! _Unwritten Soul

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