Kelvin Owusu

Rookie - 126 Points (15-10-1988 / Ghana)

A Love's Dream


It felt real, felt so real
I believed it to be virtual
I fell, I fell from the highest climb
without deaths greeting
to what seemed so pure
a life change through an unbelievable fall
unrealistic life, a joyous occasion
some what of a happily ever after situation
a life filled, a life's chance
I survived that fall, no bruising or breaks
in better shape now than before
seems like a fairy tale
life granted a life's gift
I quote the words of another in the hope of realism
dearly beloved, if this love exists only in my dreams
don't wake me up

Submitted: Monday, August 06, 2012
Edited: Monday, August 06, 2012

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Comments about this poem (A Love's Dream by Kelvin Owusu )

  • Gold Star - 18,717 Points Chinedu Dike (1/17/2015 7:53:00 AM)

    Well articulated and subtly penned to capture the bliss of love in the heart of hearts. Beautifully written in poetic diction to capture the conviction of the poet. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem THE PHOENIX STRANGLER. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 32 Points Vijay Sai R (12/3/2012 6:30:00 AM)

    nice fairy tale script...interesting to read...well done (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,411 Points * Sunprincess * (11/10/2012 4:11:00 PM)

    wow..this was one amazing dream with the perfect love..fabulous.. :) (Report) Reply

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