A Love Poem(Sorta) Poem by sandy nobody

A Love Poem(Sorta)

Rating: 4.5


when will i write a love poem?
iv been asked
guess i can draw upon feelings
from my past

but seems like everyone
writes those
so i'll try to write one
here it goes

i loved you
a long time ago
but its over now
dont you know

well not exactly a love poem
so ill try again
this time maybe i can write one
but isnt love a sin?

if not
maybe
it should be

ok
trying once more
but love poems
seem like a bore

anyway
i might get it done today
so here is my love poem
and what i have to say

Violets are blue
Roses are red
I'll love you
Only after your dead!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Smith 21 January 2007

Thank you for making a joke of the long array of love poems... What is love any way... a four letter word that is way over used... Alison

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Charley60 K 13 January 2007

Sandy, this a very interesting write. Humorous a little at first and the trying and trying to write this love poem. Perhaps one day to get it right, and even not, I think you have done quite well. An interesting ending.......

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