Musfiq us shaleheen

Bronze Star - 2,500 Points (31st, December,1970 / Khulna, Bangladesh)

A Love Poem - Poem by Musfiq us shaleheen

I come to you-
Rivers come to ocean
As monsoon comes to summer

I come to you-
Roses come to lips
As ants come to sweet

I come to you
Waves come to shore
As truth comes to me

You went too there-
I wait for you here-
Forever and ever—

Poet's Notes about The Poem

A Love Poem....
- Shaleheen,11th January,2013

Comments about A Love Poem by Musfiq us shaleheen

  • Silver Star - 4,084 Points Wahab Abdul (11/5/2013 12:59:00 AM)

    cute and sweet poem...keep going.... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 126 Points Kelvin Owusu (1/25/2013 3:37:00 AM)

    this is a cute poem nice work (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (1/15/2013 7:50:00 AM)

    a well written romantic poem the words really speaks for them tell you beautiful story....bravo sir (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,298 Points Robinson (1/14/2013 11:13:00 PM)

    This is a nice love poem and sad if you are waiting in vain for loves return.Beautiful comparisons, rivers and oceans, monsoons and summer, waves to shores. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 126 Points Kelvin Owusu (1/14/2013 2:19:00 AM)

    this is nicely penned paints a nice image (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,500 Points Musfiq Us Shaleheen (1/13/2013 11:02:00 AM)

    thanks for suggest me too instead of to... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Nader Baheri (1/13/2013 10:16:00 AM)

    so romantically penned.i enjoyed absorbs both lover and beloved.
    ~nb (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Waseem A Malla (1/13/2013 6:32:00 AM)

    it is a nyc read... Just this to/too dilemma... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,000 Points Elizabeth Padillo Olesen (1/13/2013 12:43:00 AM)

    This is one good piece, Mustiq, good images and great coherence in the lines. In the last verse, I am not sure if you mean, You went too there instead of to. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,700 Points Hazel Durham (1/12/2013 3:38:00 PM)

    A heartfelt poem written with such raw honesty and truth! ! Brilliant write! ! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,440 Points Sallam Yassin (1/12/2013 12:33:00 PM)

    the wholeness of love is to be together
    that's the grace
    where woes is to be apart
    nice and sentimental
    well done (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 11, 2013

Poem Edited: Sunday, January 13, 2013

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