A Love Or Bust Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

A Love Or Bust

Rating: 4.3


Like the earth needs the sun
I don’t need you for fun
Like the night needs the star
I need you for what you are
Like a religion needs a pray
Our love is needless to say
Like a human needs water
The bond ship will be forever
Like a baby needs milk
We have got all the perks
It’s not a jerk
To say what’s left for us
Is just
A love or bust

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Coreena Dejesus 06 March 2008

You have a way with words.. i enjoyed reading your poem

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Mattie Mils 07 March 2008

what more to express love? ? ? ? ? .........you have it all

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 27 March 2008

I was impressed by this deep rhyming poem

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Mallory Speyrer 03 April 2008

I really liked this poem. I usually try to stay away from poems that ryhme because they are usually so cliche. You managed to make this deep and meaningful, yet simple enough for anyone to understand. Nice work.

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Sherif Monem 22 May 2009

Very illuminating poem. God bless you.

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Angel Hulbert 29 July 2008

I very much enjoy reading your thoughts, and oh how true the feelings of this poem are, you make my smile return, and I remember there is hope, love and joy, somewhere out there waiting for all.

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Prabha Konara 28 May 2008

yusof you aroused my sad moments once again

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Simi Ayob 25 May 2008

Hi Sulaiman, its gr8 to read ur beautiful sentiments abt love.U really nt only regard it bt love it frm the bottom of ue heart.U know the power of words, strength of love n hidden magnitude of deep n true emotions.Well Done 'KEEP IT UP'

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Kesav Easwaran 12 April 2008

it must be a love...not a bust, for sure! cute love poem, sulaiman

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