Heather Burns


A Lost Relationship


The flowers
have lost
their petals.

Found refuge
somewhere
on a distant
shore.

Now the
season has
changed.

The grass
is lush and
green.

Tiny buds
awaken from
their winter's
nap.

A relationship
lost.

Submitted: Wednesday, June 26, 2013
Edited: Thursday, June 27, 2013

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  • Gold Star - 6,676 Points Amitava Sur (10/30/2013 11:49:00 AM)

    Yes - through time's passage the existence is lost, relationship also fades away, which is a pity. but definitely ushers a new era for the new comers (here the buds) ...... very nice (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Debanjan Dhar (7/17/2013 4:25:00 PM)

    wow. so easily said and done
    ..but then again, that's how it is
    very nicely put, ma'am (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 172 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (7/7/2013 2:57:00 PM)

    Excellent poem about life, it makes one wonder about tomorrow.
    Siya_! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,205 Points Khairul Ahsan (7/6/2013 11:35:00 PM)

    The last two lines are a shock! This is life. Nice poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 38 Points Ruby Honeytip (6/29/2013 11:35:00 PM)

    Such weight in so few words: ^) This is just so lovely.....thanks for sharing your art. Love Roobs xxx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 267 Points David Wood (6/29/2013 5:39:00 AM)

    This is a lovely poem about life. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,260 Points Neela Nath (6/28/2013 9:11:00 AM)

    Is there any pessimistic tone that rings like a sad music? I feel so.Superb! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ambrosia A (6/28/2013 5:15:00 AM)

    Trees never worry about lost petals and birds,
    It just waits for a new season to boom....
    A loving heart is never a looser, it is a born winner.
    Those who don't deserve they will loose that
    Lovely heart and become a looser forever......

    Nice, poignant poem (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,667 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (6/27/2013 9:18:00 PM)

    Tiny buds
    awaken - new relationship blooms! Simple words, nice flow. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,313 Points Jesus James Llorico (6/27/2013 9:57:00 AM)

    Another new beginning for another love lost.
    It made me think, however, for it's cost
    The bloom that was shared for someone
    Has come and being given to a new one... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,741 Points Sallam Yassin (6/27/2013 8:50:00 AM)

    in every end a new start
    and this is the transformation
    of nature in life (where is a lost there is again) nice poem about the flow of time in us/ well done Heather (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,936 Points Ken E Hall (6/27/2013 3:55:00 AM)

    Natures cycle the power of the flower explained to the tee in this seasonal poem...regards (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,685 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (6/26/2013 10:41:00 PM)

    but the new relationships sprouts from the new beginning..a beautiful poem (Report) Reply

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