Musfiq us shaleheen

Veteran Poet - 1,081 Points (31st, December,1970 / Khulna, Bangladesh)

A Lost Love - Poem by Musfiq us shaleheen

I had ceased your eyes
Locked it into my heart
And opened the Lock,
In a dancing day of May
It sang a song of love

And snapped again into,
A silent day of dark
After a long dry dark day,
grew as a foot print of fossil
And I find in a song of sad-

- Shaleheen,15th March, Khulna, Bangladesh


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A Lost Love

Comments about A Lost Love by Musfiq us shaleheen

  • Rookie - 126 Points Kelvin Owusu (3/25/2014 9:03:00 PM)

    sounds like a nice love song, nicely done (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Madina Morris (3/15/2014 4:56:00 PM)

    very deep...as love is often a deep feeling, marvelous. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,289 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (3/15/2014 12:29:00 AM)

    melancholic as the love is lost..
    it grew as a fossil
    And find in a song of sad- Time will heal and people can get rid of the fossil...
    Thank you for sharing... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 14, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 1, 2014


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