A Lost Art Poem by Jason Cline

A Lost Art



Upon inspection: imperfection,
there's deception, misdirection.
On recollection of this section
there's a fake in the collection.

Thier ambition on this mission
(to reposition this addition)
without suspicion of transition
was a risky proposition.

Neither tension in prevention,
nor the mention of detention
brought attention or dimension
to the risk of apprehension.

Needless to say, they all got away
and the painting was never returned.

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I was laying in bed just playing around with words and thought I'd come down and record this.

The structure is something like a psuedo-sonnet - 14 lines,3 quatrains and a couplet. The rhyming is ridiculously heavy in the quatrains with (a) a, (a) a, (a) a, a...(b) b...(c) c... the couplet rhymes (d) d, e creating a hard and final stop. It felt necessary to end that way after conditioning the reader the entire length of the piece. Otherwise a second rhyme there would continue their head in circles and leaving the reader with the false impression of an unfinished piece. The couplet almost has limerick-y feel.

As far as the subject of the poem, it's about a painting that was stolen from an art gallery. Somewhat inspired by The Thomas Crown Affair. The title is a play on several things, obviously the piece of art in the telling, but also the lost art of classical forms (the sonnet) and the lost art of rhyming, not often found with the magnitude of today's free verse poetry.
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