A Long While Poem by Crystal Garcia

A Long While



once in a while i may go insane
once in a while my life will be okay!
once in a long while i will love,
and shortly after i will lose!
once in a while something touches my heart and makes it move,
and then it will shiver and turn into coal!
once in a while i get hurt,
once in a while i get burnt! but always i will walk,
never will i fall,
taking the coal and learning from it all!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Gieske 21 May 2008

Life is worth taking the risks and one can expect that it won't always be without pain.

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Alan Curtis 12 May 2008

Tha bad thing bout it is that it cant just be all tha time it is always once n a while.Time marches on n his stedy pace and no one gets n his way. Time is strangly against us but your poem pretty much sums that up. Bitch'n poem Crystal, keep it up grl. Peace, Alan

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Crystal Garcia

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Bakersfield
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