A Long Time Ago. Poem by Geoffrey Fafard

A Long Time Ago.

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A long long time ago
There lived a boy
Who in his youth
Witnessed life with joy
He grew up strong
Happy and handsome
Despite those who would
See him cowering
Afraid and shivering
He would smile
He would sing
He would love
His beautiful world
Despite mankind
Regardless of intolerance
Unrepentant in practice
Of engaging with nature
He died with a smile
On his face
And God was happy
I just wanted one
He whispered
And I got him
Now I can rest a while
For this earth was his.

Monday, March 19, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: reflection
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I would like to have been that lad.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 20 March 2019

Hailing greatly to the youthful....................../// beautiful poetic expression

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Geoffrey Fafard 20 March 2019

Thank you indeed Mahtab....I am pleased that you read and enjoyed this story...Cheers Geoffrey.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 December 2018

A wonderful poem with a meaningful message. A vivid portrayal of a man of great character. Well crafted and executed write.

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Geoffrey Fafard 08 December 2018

Rose Marie..You do me a great honour. Your remarks are very welcomed. Thank you Geoffrey.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 December 2018

A beautiful poem on human values nicely executed. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.

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Geoffrey Fafard 09 December 2018

Kumarmani.Thank you my friend for your your words of encouragement they are appreciated. Cheers, Geoffrey.

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Jennifer Birchall 07 December 2018

A great poem, thank you. Well done for poem of the day.

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Geoffrey Fafard 08 December 2018

Thank you very much Jennifer. I appreciate your comments. Cheers, Geoffrey

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 December 2018

Engaging with nature! Thanks for sharing.

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Geoffrey Fafard 08 December 2018

You are more than welcome Edward. thank you so much for commenting. Geoffrey.

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