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Persian Nightingale

A Lonesome Lover

I'm tired
How much I should cry
How much my heart
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  • Kasia Fedyk (6/5/2012 3:10:00 PM)

    Oh yes, I have been there, I have been the lonesome heart and letter to God where written for only He can bring this love to me, so i believed day and night, cried the tears of sorrow and hoped that tomorrow he will come and I will see him not with my eyes but with my soul and I have received this precious gift when love became my only life for love was the only thing I new, my heart was full of this love so deep, I felt the heat with every beat, I found myself in paradise, heaven it was for God has brought this love to me for my only soul to see. Thank you I wrote this from inspiration of your poem and it is my true story, Thank you! Love and Light! (Report) Reply

  • Ashraful Musaddeq (6/27/2009 7:25:00 AM)

    Where is the place of lover
    Open my eyes
    Show me the true love

    Real observation, wonderfully ended.
    Every relation is conditional. (Report) Reply

  • Adamyan (6/19/2009 12:01:00 PM)

    'Oh, Lord... how lonesome u r in this world'......... amazing words, touches from the bottom of one`s heart... u know, i think if those words were sent to a girl, they could be sent to our Lord too... coz sometimes i think, how lonely He must be... but the poem is great, ur lucky to be able to make such thoughts. i wish u success dear friend. (Report) Reply

  • Shashendra Amalshan (5/23/2009 3:46:00 AM)

    what can I say I was feeling soo lonely before I came to this site..but now I ve found some great friends....thanks evryone for making my world beautiful...I guess you wont feel alone when you come to poemhunter..fulll of loving beautiful people....and well expressed have expressed your innermost feelings in a touching you emotions and share them with us with your poetic magic..regards (Report) Reply

  • Nasreen Dawood (5/3/2009 12:59:00 PM)

    'Show me true love Uncover'...such strong and true have a unique way of have a beautiful mind that sieves such interesting poems...keep writing :) (Report) Reply

  • Jihad T (1/17/2009 10:44:00 PM)

    How much my heart
    Should host the bye
    what a deep and hidden feeling here in these two lines and other lines
    you are a really poet
    not less than 10 (Report) Reply

  • Anjali Sinha (10/4/2008 4:39:00 AM)

    Where is the place of lover'
    hey amir soooooooo beautiful
    theres no place indeed for the lover.
    ++++++10 anjalie (Report) Reply

  • ... ... (5/15/2008 2:42:00 PM)

    And I cry! and cry and cry! How sad is to see a lover's lament written in words. Once again, you did a fine job, my nightingale. (Report) Reply

  • Rani Turton (5/6/2008 6:12:00 PM)

    The poet throughout the ages has never know where to rest his head...thanks for the fine thoughts expressed in this work. (Report) Reply

  • M M (4/27/2008 7:13:00 PM)

    Such sadness in your words!
    Though this is a wonderful poem...
    10 for you :) (Report) Reply

  • Thad Wilk (4/25/2008 2:55:00 PM)

    True love sometimes takes time to uncover, true love is worth waiting for! *10*
    Great read Shiraz!
    Friend Thad (Report) Reply

  • Arron Westbrook (4/25/2008 1:24:00 PM)

    i really like this poem, the sharp ending really finishes it off in my opinion, its a complete poem rather than a half circle. (Report) Reply Updates

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