A Lonesome Heart Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

A Lonesome Heart

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As I wake up every morning
My life losses its meaning
Finding you not around
Makes this feeling down
Your smile I miss
And the sweet kiss.

As I go to work
I am feeling broke
Emptiness engulfs me
Though I act happy as can be
Yet your shadow I can see
In all places that I stay.

As I rest into slumber
Your image I remember
So vividly in my mind
Memories you left behind
That I can no longer hold
Teardrops falling so cold.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aijaz Asif 28 July 2008

very beautifully written, marvin....thanks

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Sandra Fowler 13 December 2007

Very touching. Your closing lines are especially effective. Praise for a very fine piece. Warm regards, Sandra

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Sherry Arzish 07 December 2007

you are good at words as well as the philosphy of the poem, thankyou for sharing by the way i was really flattered on your comments at schizophrenia my poem.thanks again stay in touch sherry

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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