adil khan

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A LONELY NIGHT Poem by adil khan


A lonely night,

just me and fog.

A crushing sound of barking dog.

A gental breeze now get a blame,

the candel cries, she lost the flame.



when the stars come for a treat of light.

some dreams knocked at the door of night,



now i am the king of my land,

a fairy comes and hold my hand.

we get together

and dance tonight

what a feeling!

is it called the love at site?



suddenly someone put break on my dreamy train,

street dogs are bark again.

now i returned in the real world

of a lonely night, fog and

some barking dog.

: -) adil khan

Submitted: Sunday, November 8, 2009

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  • Bronze Star - 2,141 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (7/18/2013 2:32:00 AM)

    An excellent super dreamy poem in d night. A delightful way to rhyme. Pls read my fastin poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,947 Points Hazel Durham (3/3/2013 12:09:00 PM)

    A great write that immerses the reader into a dreamlike state then with a sharp jolt cold reality bites us! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 89 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (12/29/2009 1:03:00 AM)

    Night and fog are your companion…= Poet’s …and result is this poem…voted ten
    Write more…please
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK (Report) Reply

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