A Lonely Girl Poem by You... don't... want me...

its beautiful, it sort of similar and very different at the same time either well its well written

I can relate to this poem looking back a parts of my childhood. Very well written! Thanks for sharing.

Really well written I have also had an interpretation of 'lonely girl' Maybe you could have a look? , thanks, and you are very talented

Great poem. I can relate

So young! Too young to feel this way. sometimes the people we know, make us feel the worst. Think of this: Your poems are read by dozens, hundreds and maybe thousands, that you don't know about. If one verse you write makes someone change their life for the better, look how much you accomplished? I gave you a 10 that was much deserved.Look at life with opened eyes, not sad eyes.

I HAVE NEVER SEEN A GREAT POEM LIKE YOURS EVER SINCE I GOT INTERESTED IN POEMS, I WOULD REALLY LIKE TO BE YOUR FRIEND AND SURELY WILL LEARN A THING OR TWO........AM TUMELO GENERAL. PLEASE BE MY FRIEND

I love your message, you are a truely great poet. I want you to be my friend! ! :) check out my poem 'unheard cries'

The poem goes perfectly... It was a masterpiece.. You write very well. I hope i could write as better as you are. You lonely girl.

Hey Janay! what a great poetic power you have at this tender little age? You are a fund of great talent which very few will have at this age. Who said you are lonely? Our great Savior is with us always who cares for us more than any one else. Trust him. He is with you, me and all of us, always. Thanks for inviting me to read your cute poetry. God bless you.

Damn nice poem, i love the idea of how it builds up nicely. I especially like the last words its pretty wow