Persian Nightingale


A Lone Nightingale - Poem by Persian Nightingale

A lone nightingale
Sheds tears
He hasn’t seen his rose
For years

If a dandelion comes
He cheers
Smells her scent
And peers

She is not around yet
No fears
Till there is her fragrance
He bears

2009/12/1


Comments about A Lone Nightingale by Persian Nightingale

  • Gold Star - 5,305 Points Patricia Grantham (9/18/2013 8:57:00 PM)

    The Nightingale also is a bird by that name. She chirps her songs
    beautifully. This lovely and poignant poem about a lone Nightingale rings
    of love so fresh and new. I felt this one deep in my heart. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 6,183 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (11/4/2012 12:37:00 AM)

    Loaded with longing! Loely! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,988 Points Walterrean Salley (9/15/2012 8:14:00 AM)

    Love the nightingale. And I love this little gem. Please see my piece title Nightingale's Song. Thanks.10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rania Hammoud (1/23/2010 2:42:00 PM)

    Though short but romantic, , and beautiful...and much expressive (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,723 Points Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (12/9/2009 4:39:00 PM)

    I'm sharing your poem on Facebook.Beautiful! ! ! a ten from me! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 24 Points Emma Adamyan (12/9/2009 3:11:00 PM)

    wow... u `ve taken a core of romanticism............ now it live in this poem,10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tsira Goge (12/9/2009 3:19:00 AM)

    It is beautiful and is romantic - handwriting of a nightingale...10....
    All the best,
    Tsira (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mark Nwagwu (12/5/2009 8:39:00 AM)

    She is not around yet
    No fears
    Till there is her fragrance
    He bears

    Till there is her fragrance... sheer purity, Persian. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie M M (12/1/2009 4:27:00 AM)

    A lovely and fresh love poem.
    But can fragrance be sufficient...?

    10! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 1, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, December 24, 2009


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