Bittersweet Music


A Living Mistake - Poem by Bittersweet Music

Some times I wonder
If I slit my own throat
If I am my own murder
If my thoughts
are my own worst enemy
If I am my own death
If I am only just strife
Just me love and pain
Blind in my state
A living mistake


Comments about A Living Mistake by Bittersweet Music

  • Rookie - 184 Points Brian Jani (6/14/2014 5:09:00 PM)

    Bittersweet this is an awesome poem (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 45,954 Points Gajanan Mishra (5/10/2013 10:19:00 PM)

    just me love and pain, good write, thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 10, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 17, 2013


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