Tiku akp


A Little Love - Poem by Tiku akp

A thousand stars fall
When you fling at me a stare
While walking past me in the village fair

The sparkle in your eyes
Kindles love and passion in me
I feel in a huff I am dumped into a sea

The dark clouds hide
Behind a cluster of huts when
Of your hair you undo the tricky knots

You get lost in the crowd
I stand fixed as if in a trance
It’s because I fall in love all at once

You were no more to be seen
In the field, barn or by the river
You vanished leaving in my life a void forever


Comments about A Little Love by Tiku akp

  • Rookie - 163 Points Meena Mustafa (8/21/2013 11:54:00 AM)

    Beautifully expressed :) Love at first sight... (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 953 Points Yasmeen Khan (8/20/2013 1:25:00 PM)

    Love at first sight...but lost like a fallen star, you've written it beautifully. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,412 Points Lorraine Colon (8/19/2013 11:24:00 AM)

    Very nice, heartfelt poem. Made me sad that what once brought you happiness has now disappeared. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 18, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 20, 2013


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