A Little Crush Poem by Gloria Rose
A Little Crush
I don’t know how it started
I don’t know how he feel about me
All I know is that he is a stranger
I fell in love with a stranger
I don’t even know his inside life
His feeling about what he believes in
In what he will say after
After I told him I like him
Life is weird and bizare
Life have unexpected moment
I don’t know what is happening to me
All I know is that I’m in love
When I think about it
Over and over again
In my mind I’m thinking that I’m in love
When I think about it in real life
I say
It is just a little crush
Gloria, I like the poem, however there are some grammar and spelling errors. Take a few minutes and reread the poem, I think you will see what I saw. Overall a very good job. Lynn
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 4:17:39 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Gloria, I appreciate your note and the effort you must have put in to write your poem, 'A Little Crush'...I agree with Lynn, you must take time to re-read any thing you write for grammatical errors. Use your spell check (the tools ck) at the top of your page which will also help with grammar. Also check grammar in your profie sketch..remember this is only a critique and in no way meant to deminish your poem...keep writing...study the parts of speech and how they work. You will become a better writer. Dorothy Alves Holmes A Poet Who Loves To Sing Rewrite this poem and I promise to read it again, if you like...