A Line In The Sand Poem by Terence George Craddock

A Line In The Sand

Rating: 4.9


I drew an ultimate
resolute termination
line in the sand today

all these fake relatives
false friends everyone
who rabid rejects me

when they scorn drew
their line in the sand
rejected my pulse poetry

my line is a dagger
in the sand cut away
no more left to say


Terence George Craddock (Afterglows Echoes Of Starlight)
Copyright © Terence George Craddock

Monday, September 29, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Writing
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written in September 2014 on the 26.9.2014.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miroslava Odalovic 30 September 2014

The decision has never been more simple. I loved the decsiive tone, it's all or nothing it is :)

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 29 September 2014

You drew the line in sand but your poetry is not at all rejected. Your words speak wonder nature of your poem. Ever beautiful wording.

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