A Lifting Of My Heart Poem by Ernestine Northover

A Lifting Of My Heart

Rating: 4.7


I stepped over the rickety wooden stile,
and entered a meadow of sweetness.
Clover, daisies and buttercups
all intermingled in a silent chorus of song.

Insects buzzed in the warming sun,
and the country air
filled my lungs
with a sharp freshness.

Looking into the distance,
I watched, as a flock of birds
took to the air,
swooping across the sky,
calling joyously
in their freedom.

The World had stopped to give me
one afternoon
of sheer exhilaration.

I ran through the flowers,
I waved to the birds,
and felt a lifting of my heart.

This was paradise,
even if just for a short time,
but a time in which to refresh and energize
my body and spirit.

A time also
to renew my awareness
of the beauty of nature,
and its wonderful panorama,
displayed in all its serenity.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Uriah Hamilton 03 September 2006

This is very beautiful, I wish St. Francis could read it, and maybe he has! !

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Steve Hagget 05 September 2006

As someone always trying to write about nature I found this inspiring and beautifully written... steve

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Melvina Germain 10 September 2006

Ernestine, once again a wonderful poem comes to life. You painted a beautiful picture, I could see myself running through your lovely paradise-Excellent------Melvina

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Jim Foulk 09 February 2007

Ernestine, this was a wonderful piece you wrote, really liked it.

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Lola Cunningham 16 March 2007

Ernestine, I just joined poemhunter and was lucky enough to come upon your poems. I love your writing, for it comes not from your pen, but from your heart.

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Kesav Easwaran 15 July 2008

i can see the longing.. for the lifing of a poetic heart in tandem with a bunch of joyous birds taking to air...good poets bring out lines beautified from what they see around and place them on a poetic platter... good lines such as these...10

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Philip Housiaux 18 May 2008

crucial observations and feelings are caught. good work

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Hemakumar Nanayakkara 20 April 2008

An amazing poem about the beauties of nature. It was an absolute serene piece of write.

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David Stansfield 07 April 2008

Lovely, lovely! It reminds me of summer. Will it come this year.

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Lillian J. 01 April 2008

Imageful and beautiful work! Lilly :)

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