## A Life Peeps Out Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

## A Life Peeps Out

Rating: 5.0


On a perfectly cemented floor
a crack on it said a lot more
who ever tapped on its door
for a sprout of grass to peep out door

The rain drops did so..tup..tup
it did knock the crack on the floor
the rain dropp came down on floor
with a seed in its womb it bore

a seed which brought out
a life too..a green sprout
man's imperfection helps
god's impregnation

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Martyres 24 June 2009

A very original depiction of life - well scripted.10

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Subbaraman N V 25 June 2009

Yes; truly depicted! Well crafted!

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Lady Grace 25 June 2009

that's it//perfectly written..

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Catrina Heart 26 June 2009

a seed which brought out a life too..a green sprout man's imperfection helps god's impregnation ---- meaningful poem. well structured and nice echoing sense...10

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Joseph Poewhit 26 June 2009

True about them cracks

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Smiley Hooker 04 July 2009

Another meaningful and lovely write, Sam. I love it! : -)

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Sandhya S N 03 July 2009

Powerful words on the power of nature regards Sandhya

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Kranthi Pothineni 29 June 2009

Nice prolific thought to ponder on.

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Raj Arumugam 29 June 2009

Lovely piece about the power of nature...

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i enjoyed the for you used. and of course the wording is super.

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