A.. Freeman

Gold Star - 12,603 Points (all it took was a thought / Right Now, Right Here)

A Life In Turmoil! - Poem by A.. Freeman

A life in turmoil,
is like an engine
with no motor oil!

It turns and churns
and finally burns!

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Comments about A Life In Turmoil! by A.. Freeman

  • Gold Star - 10,797 Points Douglas Scotney (4/17/2014 10:44:00 PM)

    To Myself
    Keep going the way you are going.
    It will be a matter of time
    You've used all the fuel you brought.

    Once there
    What they use to get around
    Be it thought. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 50,204 Points Roseann Shawiak (4/11/2014 10:06:00 PM)

    How true that is! ! Love it! RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,009 Points Khairul Ahsan (4/10/2014 10:10:00 PM)

    Loved your poem. I agree!
    'It turns and churns
    and finally burns! ' - So true! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 10, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, April 21, 2014

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