(31st, December,1970 / Khulna, Bangladesh)

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A Life as I see

Neither forever nor infinite life
But there unbound water drops from the ice
A control freak peppy stream flows through nature
As time passageway from born to death

I catch sun shines at morning as mother's smile
I sense a rose blooms at early noon when love mushrooms
I heed a cuckoo sings when darling far from me
I bath on moonlit when she comes back to me

I escape everything except I missed everything
I can't wait for anything except I trust on everything
I realize nothing except love that beget love
As I pen an ode that accomplish my darling

I watch how daffodils die at evening
I judge how darling leaves me at shore
I feel how time fades my mother's smile
As like as sun sets at evening
And how evening star rises again-

-Shaleheen,2nd March,2013

Submitted: Saturday, March 02, 2013
Edited: Sunday, March 03, 2013


Poet's Notes about The Poem

A life as i see: A realization of life

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  • Kelvin Owusu (3/15/2013 9:44:00 AM)

    this is an excellent piece, beautifully done, i particularly loved the second last stanza keep up the great work

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  • Madina Morris (3/7/2013 4:48:00 PM)

    BRAVO BRAVO! This poem is one of your best yet. I absolutely love the part, I heed a cuckoo sings when darling far from me
    I bath on moonlit when she comes back to me. WONDERFUL!

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  • Vivek Tiwari (3/5/2013 9:41:00 PM)

    The thing that I liked in thew poem is the idea of connecting your love waves with that on the beings of Nature.

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