A Lie Poem by Kieran J1996

A Lie



Every word,
Every touch,
Every look,
A Lie,
You left me,
Feeling worthless,
Confused,
Enraged,
You left me wanting,
Solitude,
Death,
And then,
Revenge...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A poem of deceitfulness... A lie, bears its own fruit! Good write; D

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Celiene Watts 17 June 2010

Really, really good :) quite angry and sad and a bit of mixed emotions, but is awesome :)

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Crazy Vampire 03 June 2010

wow! this is awesome! i can totally feel ur anger and disappointment...=[

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The Lost.. 03 June 2010

few words but meaningful i really likeed it keep writing, thanks.

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