A Lady As Sandhya Poem by Aman Saa

A Lady As Sandhya

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She had often exclaimed that I was like the night
A candle light cannot claim to explore whom,
A riddle, or perhaps a crossword without a guide.
She tried to fill me
sometimes the empty lanes across me
and sometimes those deserted downward directions.
She either tried to make a way
or find an escape.
She did not knew that
each mistake of her ink
was leaving a scar on my empty belonging.
The trembling of a night in pain
has a treaty with the crust of the earth
of that of secrecy...
She did not knew that the wounded
words were setting a pyre.
My love was instead looking for life
in little spaces like her finger tips
and the sunset on her forehead.
Slowly I began to love this web of her
roaming vocabulary, definition-less.
From whom the moon borrows the beauty of sadness.
A lady who spoke so soft
and smelled like an evening flower of my village.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sakalabaktula Sairaj 30 November 2017

it is so nice one i read.. i can see it so nice keep writing more and more poems

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Passionate Reader 13 July 2013

She did not knew that each mistake of her ink was leaving a scar on my empty belonging. lovely lines! ! ! i truly enjoyed them. Great poem :)

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Ramesh Rai 12 July 2013

i can not stop myself to say u r outstanding.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 10 January 2013

Wow an intense poem and i esp admire d creative lines like d lil space btw fingertips. Kudos fellow indian poet.

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The Reader 02 December 2012

It reminds me of a saying by William Cowper: There is a pleasure in poetic pains which only poets know...though impossible to decipher, but easy to give an aesthetic judgement for it's an artistic write for some lucky lady! ! !

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Aman Saa

Aman Saa

Assam, India
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