A Kiss From A Rose Poem by Jake Deeds

A Kiss From A Rose

Rating: 4.2


I've spanned the edges of echelon's ledges
And languished the austere abyss
From the hue of grey's obscurity
And time's eternal perpetuity
In stone I make my pledges
And intomb it with a kiss...<><

Sunday, July 17, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 17 July 2011

Nice poem composed with vivid imagery. I liked the theme very much. Kudos to your skill. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... I shall be highly obliged if you please read and rate my poem 'A world of treason' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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Rachel Butler 26 October 2011

'From the hue of grey’s obscurity And time’s eternal perpetuity' RAB

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Ruby Honeytip 28 November 2012

Very cool write: ^) Congrats on getting POD.

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Babatunde Aremu 28 November 2013

Well-penned. I like it. Kudos

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Chinedu Dike 20 February 2018

Beautiful rendition of words in a well encapsulated piece nicely penned with insight. A well expressed thoughts and feelings. Thanks for sharing Jake and do remain enriched.

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Dr Antony Theodore 03 June 2017

austere abyss grey's obscurity eternal perpetuity intombing with a kiss. I was wondering about the usage of words and the Coinage of words together.. you are a master of words……. Conveying a lot. Thank you dear poet.. tony

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Dr Antony Theodore 08 January 2016

In stone I make my pledges And intomb it with a kiss...[][ Jake Deeds Rhythmic endings of the lines.. i like it very much. the use of words and its meaning. very very nice poem. much better than writing long poems. thank you very much. tony

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Rocky Lizardi.brown 28 November 2014

This is art. Magnificent poetry.

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John Richter 28 November 2014

Sometimes a piece of art has no meaning - and its sheer beauty lays within that fact... As the Mona Lisa Smile. It's the hint of a secret that is so mesmerizing sometimes - and not always its reveal. Your palette of words here create a beautiful mind swirl. The fact that it takes me nowhere is what ravished me so.... In deed a moment well spent - reading this. Thank you...

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