A Killer's Mind... Poem by Marria Attar

A Killer's Mind...

Rating: 2.7


Killers, killers
Killers think that what they’re doing is right
Always wanting to start a fight
Thinking that that’s a way to show they’re strong
Encouraging people to follow along
Showing that the others deserve to die
And oh... who cares if they weep and cry
That’s a symbol of their weakness, they’d say
Having full pleasure as they walk away
Leaving all those families with no hope to survive
And leaving no expectations for a child to stay alive
They’d walk amongst the others and laugh with full joy
Not caring if they’ve killed a man or even a little boy
They’d destroy every house around
Demolishing it entirely to the ground
They’d think that they had finally reached the top
While the others don’t know when they’ll finally stop.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank Macias 04 December 2009

honestly... a killers mind doesn't work that way.. I'm thinking that your thinking more along the lines of a bully, not a killer. A killer is disturbed. Hes not killing the people because he thinks hes better then them. The motive of the killer is usually very abstract and hard to understand....

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Michael Figueroa 28 December 2008

Nice choice of words and rhyming! Thats pretty much how i see a killers mind

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Ashley Carnes 14 October 2008

hey i like your poems they r really good. and this one i like most...

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Tania Nuno 23 August 2008

i really like this one... : ]

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