A Keepsake Poem by Sandra Fowler

A Keepsake

Rating: 3.6


One day you brought me raindrops in your hand.
'Here are some precious tears for you', you said.
A shadow bird was winging through the sky.
His silhouette escaped my finger tips.

Beside our creek the summer sycamores
Were whispering old folk songs to day's end.
You put your shoulder to the weather, Friend.
You lit the hard times with your empathy.

I looked into your Appalachian eyes
And saw that west was a most wondrous thing.
The distant bird's wings gleamed in failing flight.
The luminosity was purest gold.


(2007)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amberlee Carter 18 June 2007

this is beautiful. I'm sorry I cannot offer anything else.. Always, Amberlee

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Diane Violet 18 June 2007

Exquisite Sandra, simply exquisite! ! Hugs, Diane

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Marci Made 19 June 2007

Your imagery in here is simply out of this world unbeatable....You most certainly have the magic touch in your poems...They are simply splendid and draw one in where one can feel what your writing....To me that is the definition of a poet, , I say to you BRAVO.! ! ~~~~~~~marci.xo

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Marina Gipps 19 June 2007

Very nice indeed...and quite a keepsake.

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Edna Javelosa 22 June 2007

the choice of words is so beautiful...with outstanding grace and dignity in itself..i loved it..

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Roseann Shawiak 16 October 2013

A precious keepsake preserved in this beautiful poem forever. Great poem. Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 22 May 2009

Exquisite Sandra, imagery unbeatable, the theme of love rounded off into a keepsake - sheer bliss. Brilliant write

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what a beautiful home we have here...lovely write

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Nimal Dunuhinga 10 October 2007

I am sorry for my belated comment, Sandra this is a precious keepsake!

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Marvin Brato 20 September 2007

Beautiful as the rainbow in the sky.... a promise of love to last! . Thanks for sharing. High mark. Regards.

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W. Columbia, WV, USA
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