A Jingle By The Green Poem by Dr subhendu kar

A Jingle By The Green

Rating: 5.0


Yet the golden bell
when tune wakes up from the sorrow
as inspiring by the hope of tomorrow
the dream when jingles by the green

the graceful glow
when painted by the rays of rainbow
when unseen into the folds of the cloud
the morning as delightful by the mirror

searching upon the milieu
the gleeful flairs as glazed
when delved out from the crowd deep
as shimmering across the moon
when untouched even by the rain

the mute voices when besotted
by the cuckoo’s song
the breath slithers one after the other
the dream onto the hope unexhausted

by the quests and queries
for the musk to follow
still we move by the passion
pattens never seem to be of your own

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Will P. Litter 19 April 2008

Your words in the poem felt nice when read.

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Patrice James 19 April 2008

another wonderful poetry dr. kar I truely enjoy every words and very inspiring.....

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Thad Wilk 19 April 2008

A splendid poem artful in every sense, a great read indeed! ! *10*! ! Best regards! ! Friend Thad

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Ursula Tillmann 21 April 2008

Wonderful inspiring. Thank you.

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Seema Chowdhury 22 April 2008

Inspiring by the hope of tomorrow lovely and superb. very catchy line, the flow of this poem is so beautiful. feel like reading it over and over agian and absorb in its wordings. excellent work of art i must say. thanks for sharing with all. take crae seema

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Tsira Goge 02 May 2008

'the dream onto the hope unexhausted' You are very talented author! It is surprising poems with fantastic metaphors... ...10... Thanks for yours kind words, Tsira

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Malini Kadir 29 April 2008

Wonderful work....loved the inner essence conveyed

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Duncan Wyllie 26 April 2008

WONDERFUL! Love duncan X

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Shelley L Baxter-stanley 25 April 2008

In truth my friend your words come alive on the screen for me...the emotions and beauty of your words guide the reader to want to read more! .Truly you hold so much talent and so much ability to share your beautiful thoughts. Another wonder filled piece of work Subhendu...... Keep the faith and share lots as I enjoy your writing tremendously! ((Smile)) Shelley

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Alison Cassidy 24 April 2008

You have such a distinctive poetic voice Subhendu. Rich and intensely lyrical with images that linger long after the page has closed. I love your 'jingle by the green' and your 'besotted by the cuckoos's song'. Beautiful penning. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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