Asif Andalib

Rookie (27 November 1967 / Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh)

A Hymn - Poem by Asif Andalib

God please one more love
Please one more love
I won’t fly away
Like a wild dove

God it won’t take too long
Sweetheart please one more song
God one more poem my friend
If you can’t it’s a shame
O God please one more poem
If you can’t it’s a shame

God please be kind Baby
Endless please one more truth
I know you know we know
Way of life is not smooth

God give me more wisdom
God give me to my Mom
Many more smiles Soul of souls
As long as zillion miles
O God please many more smiles
As long as zillion miles


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  • Rookie - 121 Points Maia Padua (7/23/2013 10:30:00 PM)

    a great wanting....great love from a heart who knows and finds love..a wonderful hymn of selfless love.
    Great write, Asif (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 121 Points Maia Padua (7/23/2013 10:27:00 PM)

    a wanting...a great craving... a great faith... a wonderful hymn of selfless love...great write, Asif (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Yvette Marina Nario (5/8/2013 1:01:00 PM)

    I see there is alot of wanting love in this poem. It seems as if the poem shows a deep desire to be acknowledged for wanting and desiring for what most humans crave for; the love of mother, the love of a lover, and the love of G-d... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 21, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, September 27, 2013


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