Neela Nath


A Hut Near A River


Where I want to live
with you my seventh heaven,
is not far from this everyday
life, but very near to it..
A hut, near a river
with crystal water,
fish playing there on
sunbathed pebbles.....
You and me with our little
daughter will live a
calm, calm life..
Over there we shall see
the forest, away from that
winding path.
You will be back
in the evening,
and I shall watch
you coming eagerly.....
None will come on our way
to happiness!
No feud will be there.
No flame,
other than ours!
A hut near a river,
the trees, blooming plants,
will enhance our happiness....
You, me and daughter,
three will be drinking
from the tumbler of life....
The flavor of Nature...
You, Me and.....

Submitted: Wednesday, July 24, 2013
Edited: Thursday, July 25, 2013

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  • Rookie - 214 Points Chris G. Vaillancourt (5/7/2014 10:03:00 AM)

    a deep and thought-provoking poem...i really enjoyed it. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,059 Points Kanav Justa (1/22/2014 4:27:00 AM)

    yws, , thats lovely imagery, , , , loved it, , , (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,543 Points * Sunprincess * (12/2/2013 8:31:00 PM)

    beautiful imagery and this sounds like a dream...
    if only we could live alone in nature...it would feel like heaven :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,372 Points Valsa George (7/25/2013 12:43:00 AM)

    Away from the din and bustle of life, this idyllic haven consisting of the three of you on the river bank seems so blissful! A serenity prevails, calming all disqueit! ! Enjoyed! (Report) Reply

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