A Humble Prayer Poem by ramesh rai

A Humble Prayer



O God!
You have created the entire nature
made so many creatures and gifted
to live in, like
fire to burn
water to quench
air to breath and so on
all are important for life

If fire is your formidable signet
water is your cool signet
Air manifest the signet of
your supreme pleasure

O God!

I have an humble prayer for water
please give us water
to quench thirst of all
which gives us life too

We promise
we must not make a fun
of your cool manifestation
that is flowing in the veins of earth
we promise not to spoil it

Give us water through rain also
and make the atmosphere calm


We do promise and give a slogan

SAVE WATER
SAVE EARTH
SAVE LIFE.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 09 July 2012

Being humble is nothing wrong and be humble to the our Creator is even better....It has a good appeal to ask to request for something we dont have....we are nothing but only a living that having a soul in a life, we need meaning to come alive and stay alive, to Him we stayed as the place our true love ever remain...so be humble as we are just a dropp of water in a jar...to ask for joy in calmness around...live your life with blessing Him Ramesh, i love the poem, a good campaign for earth lover_Unwritten Soul

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Marieta Maglas 31 July 2012

great prayer-blessings

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Ken E Hall 06 December 2012

Save water indeed in your humble poem, it is the most no1 thing on this planet to save the recless use of water and make the rivers flow and clean...love the prayer love the thought...regards

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Kewayne Wadley 14 May 2014

Words cannot express how much this is needed! Very humble indeed! Simply wonderful

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Amitava Sur 01 February 2014

A nice imagery giving emphasis on need of preserving and saving our life line ie, water..... loved it

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Muhammad Ali 05 January 2014

a good deed. save His blessings. A Humble Prayer. And a true prayer.

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Bharti Chandwani 21 October 2013

really a very good prayer one must understand its worth today...

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Queeny Gona 08 October 2013

Wonderful prayer and great oath taken

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