ramesh rai

Gold Star - 19,819 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

A Humble Prayer - Poem by ramesh rai

O God!
You have created the entire nature
made so many creatures and gifted
to live in, like
fire to burn
water to quench
air to breath and so on
all are important for life

If fire is your formidable signet
water is your cool signet
Air manifest the signet of
your supreme pleasure

O God!

I have an humble prayer for water
please give us water
to quench thirst of all
which gives us life too

We promise
we must not make a fun
of your cool manifestation
that is flowing in the veins of earth
we promise not to spoil it

Give us water through rain also
and make the atmosphere calm

We do promise and give a slogan


Comments about A Humble Prayer by ramesh rai

  • Gold Star - 6,607 Points Kewayne Wadley (5/14/2014 7:32:00 AM)

    Words cannot express how much this is needed! Very humble indeed!
    Simply wonderful (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 19,214 Points Amitava Sur (2/1/2014 3:35:00 AM)

    A nice imagery giving emphasis on need of preserving and saving our life line ie, water..... loved it (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 813 Points Muhammad Ali (1/5/2014 12:48:00 AM)

    a good deed. save His blessings. A Humble Prayer. And a true prayer. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Bharti Chandwani (10/21/2013 10:40:00 AM)

    really a very good prayer one must understand its worth today... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,134 Points Queeny Gona (10/8/2013 1:55:00 AM)

    Wonderful prayer and great oath taken (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,340 Points Ken E Hall (12/6/2012 3:42:00 AM)

    Save water indeed in your humble poem, it is the most no1 thing on this planet to save the recless use of water and make the rivers flow and clean...love the prayer love the thought...regards (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,519 Points Marieta Maglas (7/31/2012 5:10:00 PM)

    great prayer-blessings (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,512 Points Unwritten Soul (7/9/2012 9:40:00 AM)

    Being humble is nothing wrong and be humble to the our Creator is even better....It has a good appeal to ask to request for something we dont have....we are nothing but only a living that having a soul in a life, we need meaning to come alive and stay alive, to Him we stayed as the place our true love ever remain...so be humble as we are just a dropp of water in a jar...to ask for joy in calmness around...live your life with blessing Him Ramesh, i love the poem, a good campaign for earth lover_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 1, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 10, 2012

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