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A House

I cried by myself in a house
A house stocked full of people

I bled by myself in a house
A house with a mother

I broke down by myself in a house
A house that I curse

The pain is here still
In the house that is my body

Like a rose i bloomed without my water
In a house that had no light to grow

I stopped crying in a house
A house that hates me back

Submitted: Friday, January 01, 2010
Edited: Friday, January 01, 2010

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  • Mahyar Goodarzi (1/14/2010 12:51:00 AM)

    is that a house? wow what a house. i think more comfortable somewhere else!
    just kidding. nice impression. comment mine if U can.

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  • Scott Creed (1/7/2010 6:14:00 PM)

    all i can say is wow... this is really good. i feel the same way too... check out some of my work

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  • Christopher Is Dead (but I'm More Than Alive) (1/1/2010 3:34:00 PM)

    I kinda feel the same way alot. I think I know how you feel in this poem. I like the way you expressed your emotions thru this. Keep writing that way.

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