Viktoria Lilith


A House - Poem by Viktoria Lilith

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I cried by myself in a house
A house stocked full of people

I bled by myself in a house
A house with a mother

I broke down by myself in a house
A house that I curse

The pain is here still
In the house that is my body

Like a rose i bloomed without my water
In a house that had no light to grow

I stopped crying in a house
A house that hates me back


Comments about A House by Viktoria Lilith

  • Rookie Mahyar Goodarzi (1/14/2010 12:51:00 AM)

    is that a house? wow what a house. i think more comfortable somewhere else!
    just kidding. nice impression. comment mine if U can. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Scott Creed (1/7/2010 6:14:00 PM)

    all i can say is wow... this is really good. i feel the same way too... check out some of my work (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Christopher Is Dead (but I'm More Than Alive) (1/1/2010 3:34:00 PM)

    I kinda feel the same way alot. I think I know how you feel in this poem. I like the way you expressed your emotions thru this. Keep writing that way. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 1, 2010

Poem Edited: Friday, January 1, 2010


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