A Hope To Achieve You...! ! ! Poem by LUCKY GAUTAM poet

A Hope To Achieve You...! ! !

Rating: 5.0


You were my friend
You became little special
You became my darling
Slowly a sweet heart
Now its high time
You are my life … my everything


I wish before u cry I should die
You are my essence and I never lie
I have your image deep inside my heart
Although we have miles to cover
But still I say we are a breathe far


You are my life
My dream gal
Might b far apart
But still very close
Still in my heart
In my words
In my life …. in every heartbeat of mine


I think of a date with an endless sea
Where we’ll be alone
In that dark night
With cold breeze all around
I’ll hug you.. to keep you warm
You are too cutie to me
Too adorable to be ignored …


I have dreamt of a life
Where you'll be mine
We'll be together
We'll have a life of our own
A small but a sweet home
With no world to disturb
You’ll be mine … I’ll be your’s…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lucky Gautam 30 January 2012

thank you aastha... thanx alot

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Aastha Uppal 30 January 2012

the flow in the writing, the continuity, emotions, feelings everything woven beautifully.. an honesty in your thoughts quite evident. nice write.

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Lucky Gautam 30 January 2012

thank you thank you very much... its devoted to whom I love the most my girlfriend... my love my everything

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Sankaran Ayya 29 January 2012

GOOD POEM GOOD START. I think of a date with an endless sea...and following lines and thoughts represent present day poetry without imitating poetry of by gone centuries That is why you like my poems Feelings are flowing spontaneously in your words. That is good poetry Keep writing.Read my poems and commend.All the best LUCKY GOUTAM -KAVIN CHARALAN

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