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hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 18,721 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

A Holy Call


Country needs freedom
Common men has seen it seldom
There is no fresh induction of slavery
It is concern of everybody

Normal man thinks about nation
With all kind of international relations
Peaceful struggle and bloody wars
Scientific research and existence of stars

States fight with narrow end
With no cordial relation as friends
No feeling of neighborhood
Forget about nationalism and brotherhood

National wealth is not fully explored
Poor remain to suffer and ignored
In such condition people rise in revolt
And prove stubborn as tough bolt

Leaders give call but with self interest
Nobody sees it as crucial test
Nation must survive at any cost
It is dreamed by the mist of the people

Submitted: Thursday, July 11, 2013
Edited: Friday, July 12, 2013

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  • Gold Star - 18,721 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/14/2013 9:19:00 PM)

    Re: Holy call (Score: 1)
    by induce on Friday, July 12,2013 (12: 18: 51)
    Jadia, hi there mate. I hear or try to visualize your writings they seem
    to be intense and real to me.

    Keep it up mate,

    andye (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 18,721 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/12/2013 8:52:00 PM)

    Promila Sharma
    Normal man thinks about nation
    With all kind of international relations
    Peaceful struggle and bloody wars
    Scientific research and existence of stars (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 18,721 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/11/2013 8:29:00 PM)

    Neil McLeod53 minutes ago
    Dear Hasmukh,
    You write as if you take this medium seriously, and I commend you for it. English is a tough language in which to express your self with eloquence. I strongly recommend that you ask a good Eglish speaker to take a look at your poems before you post them so that the errors in grammar do not mar what you are trying so well to say.
    For example,
    Country needs freedom
    Common men has seen it seldom should read - Common men have seen it seldom
    or Common man Has seen it seldom.

    Are you with me here?

    Do you like this one: http: //poetry.com/poems/863848-Mango
    Best wishes

    Dr. Neil Stewart McLeod
    Comment 1 Comment0


    Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago
    yes Neil so kind of you.I needed elderly advise too.more of grammer and cleanliness may spoil poem in its totality

    Readers must get fair idea of concept.. the power to express and more of it is to reach people.


    i wish the soul of poet must remain in tact (Report) Reply

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