A Heart Unswaying Poem by Adam M Snow

A Heart Unswaying

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A heart unswaying on the water surface.
What burden is this; a love without a tragedy?
Such frail the human soul,
who are we to judge?
So easy are we to drown,
like a heart unswaying on the water surface,
so heavy that it sinks.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Peter Stavropoulos 31 December 2013

If you were Gertrude Stein, and lived in the Paris of the 1930's, then I would say this is a great poem. Adam, this poem shows vision and sensitivity. Best of luck.

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