A Haiku About The First Time Me And Laura Had Met Poem by Nicholas Spandrel

A Haiku About The First Time Me And Laura Had Met



The moon bright tonite,
Love in the air,
Love strong and true,
True love found at long last,
The first time loves had met.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Hansford 24 April 2009

At 24 syllables (and that's not even including the 14 syllables in the title, which strictly it shouldn't have) this is a touch long for a haiku. They also traditionally have three lines. Why not just call it a short poem? And why 'alas' when you find true love? It makes most people happy.

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