A Guilty Cry... Poem by Florida Angel

Florida Angel

Florida Angel

Rio 40 Graus..Cidade Maravilha...Delray Beach

A Guilty Cry...

Rating: 5.0


Sometimes I try, others it just happens
but so fool I feel when reason hits
How could I even cry? So much I have
So many I love...O God, please don't punish me
Don't think my waterly eyes are blind, as I can see...
I can feel how Good you've been always Dearly to me.

But God, You've made me Human...
Please, forgive me! ! ! !
But that's why I cry...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Not a member No 4 05 July 2007

It is no guilt to be human, to love, to live. Again, you have said a lot here in a few words. You have potential. Keep working at it Karina. xx jim

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Kesav Easwaran 23 December 2008

'Don't think my waterly eyes are blind, as I can see... I can feel how Good you've been always Dearly to me'... how sweet and solid this confession, this request to God reads! good poem, Karina...talking its heart out...talking divine...10

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Jemarie Ragudo 12 November 2007

God listens to the prayer of a repentant heart. Nice work!

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Ana Monnar 28 July 2007

You poured out your heart and soul and it worked.

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K K 13 July 2007

I would rather be human than a robot :) Nicely done!

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Roy Storey 07 July 2007

We are what we are, guilty of notting but living.i like the poem Roy.

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Florida Angel

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Rio 40 Graus..Cidade Maravilha...Delray Beach
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