A Goodbye Poem by sahara adhikari

A Goodbye

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my hands are drifted and raised,
palms rotate and fingers are let,
'Let' to give you a last goodbye;
a goodbye - which have make my heart to break,
making me feel alone in my own dream,
my own world where i am murmuring in..

each step of mine are repelling your's,
i feel you so close,
yet it's making me far from the octave where my feeling flows.

i pull the curtain, so that no-one knows;
my heart breaking and shattering,
my nerves cramping and trembling.
...but yet i raised recollecting my courage,
hoping for a good day i forbade,
making my palms to rotate and fingers to let,
let to give you a last good-bye,
a 'goodbye' which is making my heart to break...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

hoping for a good day i forbade, , , , nice composition nice day may come any way wait for good outcome and welcome

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Ramesh Rai 09 December 2011

never say good bye, always say meet u again, nice poem, full marks.

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Ramesh Rai 09 December 2011

never say good bye, always say meet u again, nice poem, full marks.

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Vipins Puthooran 24 October 2011

Beautiful poem! Sometimes a goodbye can break our mood of heart.. Well written, , ,

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