A Gleaming Smile Poem by Y Sunita Devi

A Gleaming Smile

Rating: 4.7


She carries,
a gleaming smile,
as she walks by,
Like a candle at night!

She is strong,
she is hope,
she is love,
She is truth!

To whomever she believes in,
To whatever she devotes truly,
She is a being of true light,
She is a star of the night!

She is my dearest Saro!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 18 December 2008

a sweet write to your Saro...would definitely bring a smile on her face...pleasing poem, Winnie...10

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Sebastine Humaemo 19 December 2008

waa line of yours soaked in love and care.......a great gift for your saro.....sebastine......10 for sure....

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Zachary Clark 20 September 2009

This is a beautiful short poem. Wonderfully written great work!

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Ted M 30 August 2009

A very Interesting Saro! (Paaro from Devdas?) The first Para is so beautiful, a lovely dedication.

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Afzal Shauq 27 June 2009

(((a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with...afzal shauq))) hope you ever read my this famous say..but here you too smiles in different but charming way and I agree with you words sure.. like this stanza very much To whomever she believes in, To whatever she devotes truly, She is a being of true light, She is a star of the night! let me give you...10++++++++++ points to show you are writing well

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Lady Grace 17 June 2009

she is the darling of your heart, the theme of this poem and the heroine that makes you smile..grace

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Chad Robinson 21 March 2009

Will you please introduce me to her? ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I gave you an 8

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