A Ghazal - I Feel Lost Poem by Sunil Uniyal

A Ghazal - I Feel Lost

Rating: 2.9


I don't know why, it's strange but true-
I feel lost in front of you

Virtues in me are too many,
You take only a bird's eye-view.

What is all this roaming about?
Why is life a wandering Jew?

In this world of tasks undone,
Days are like the morning dew.

Here's a city of millions where,
Uni's been seeking friends few.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 22 October 2018

I don't know why, it's strange but true- I feel lost in front of you Virtues in me are too many, You take only a bird's eye-view. All credit to you for such a wonderful poem. Writing Ghazals in English is not an easy task but you have nicely maintained the elegance of this form in your poetry. Thanks for sharing.

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Reshma Ramesh 03 October 2008

very very neat indeed

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 06 March 2008

a nice rhyme indeed................

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Vidyadhar ... 05 March 2008

Good piece of work with rhymes and rhythm

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