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A full circle

The parched ground
with wounds as wide as craters,
stared at the relentless, harsh blue.
Leafless, huge trees exposed their skeletons.
Stunted shrubs clustered seeking succor in proximity.
Carcasses strewn all around,
Bodies dragged themselves helplessly.
The sea beat listlessly on the hot sandy shores.

To whom do they plead for mercy?
There was nothing left which could even appeal.

And then …. when all was done
a cluster of dark black ominous clouds
gathered in the distant horizon.
An army to conquer the dead.
None left to rejoice.

Slowly, they marched forward
Lightning flashed, clouds roared.
Beating the drums to mark their arrival.


A first few drops fell on the earth's face.
She licked her lips in disbelief.
The sea suddenly gathered courage to rise and heave.
Unseen life scrambled out of crevices and ran helter skelter.
Lifeless till now the birds chirped faintly.
The branches opened their hearts to receive this manna from heaven.

.... And destruction gave way to creation,
….. completing a full circle.
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Submitted: Wednesday, July 11, 2012


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  • Yash Shinde (3/31/2014 2:06:00 AM)

    excellent imagery and beautiful personification...............lovely poem

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  • Heather Wilkins (6/8/2013 12:59:00 PM)

    excellent imagery. A circle will always be completed.

  • Wahab Abdul (5/14/2013 7:20:00 AM)

    lovely thought and nicely crafted poems..love it

  • Chandra Thiagarajan (2/17/2013 12:50:00 AM)

    A first few drops fell on the Earth's face / She licked her lips in disbelief /are wonderful lines and personification of the Earth! ! The whole poem is fantastic and the ending completely fabulous completing the full circle from the caption! ! A great write to enjoy! !

  • Nithin Purple (1/2/2013 2:12:00 AM)

    NICE IMMOTIONSSSSSSSSS

  • Valsa George (11/14/2012 5:15:00 AM)

    Beautiful depiction of a drought stricken, parched land drenched by the falling drops of torrential rain and Nature, thus completing her circle! Enjoyed much!

  • Allemagne Roßmann (9/9/2012 11:20:00 AM)

    Rich and allusive i liked it

  • Gillena Cox (7/27/2012 9:44:00 AM)

    the story told with such drama; a spellbinding poem

  • Savita Tyagi (7/15/2012 9:20:00 PM)

    The hot dry summer and welcoming rain! Life smiles upon earth again and again. Always enjoy reading your poems.Thanks for sharing.

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