A Friend Made Poem by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie

A Friend Made

Rating: 3.0


Puffs a bright light from the magic of a fay,
Very much through his wand of marvels to play
A baby dragon to form so cute and gay,
Love has in that innocence, its way
Tender that way to touch the fay's heart to stay
To be fond of the dragon with wings to sway
The air to let it up floating without delay.
The fay young, with none to play with till this day,
So has created a playmate that he may
Have a true loving friend with warmth's every ray.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 19 May 2009

Great ending and rhymes.........meaningful craft written with nice imagery! ! ! ! 10+++

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Marieta Maglas 15 June 2009

I love this: ''So has created a playmate that he may Have a true loving friend with warmth's every ray. '' lovely poetic resources, wonderful rhymes, well written poem...10++

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Jack Price 05 July 2009

I can relate so much to this poem because I value friendship so much myself. Thanks for sharing this one with me. J. L.

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A baby dragon to form so cute and gay, Love has in that innocence, its way love has its own way to ract and shy also.. good wrote... read mine cry not, butterflies around and mary to marry

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John Chizoba Vincent 09 December 2013

nice poem. please drop by and have a click on my poems and drop a comment wants to improve in writing

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Kctony Xtopher Nkwocha 02 November 2009

Bros, you too much. I actually do appreciate this poem a lot. Puffing light from the magic of a fay. A young dragon having a gay growth into something affable. I am proud of you.

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Abdul Athani 24 September 2009

very nice poem 10+++

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Patti Masterman 10 September 2009

Lots of creative play with words in here and a nice feeling to it. Has a noble feel to it.

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Surya . 24 July 2009

really wonderful poem.the words are meaningful, shows the poets love for nature. voted10 surya

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