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Dave Alan Walker

(Pudsey, Leeds)

A Free World


Oh lord see me
tell me I'm still free
I see non existent chains
wrapped around me

In a world of opportunity
I thought we was free
but I have a feeling
some ones watching me

Oh lord save me
take all these eyes off of me
why is there no peace
in the land of the free

It seems to me
the only way anybody can be free
is if they are not breathing

Submitted: Tuesday, January 22, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, January 22, 2013

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  • Stephen W (12/20/2013 3:51:00 PM)

    'None are so hopelessly enslaved as those who falsely believe they are free' (J. W. Von Goethe) .
    Snowden has shown that you were right. (Report) Reply

  • Mohabeer Beeharry (9/7/2013 8:42:00 AM)

    The only way one can be free is to be honest about life.
    We weave to many strings
    We tell to many selfish lies just to stay on top..
    I love this writing.
    Simple, far sighted and deep.
    Congrats

    Mohabeer Beeharry

    I have just posted a poem. A touch of light
    There could be something for you there.

    Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Julius Lenjatin (7/10/2013 7:57:00 AM)

    freedom, freedom, freedom is what every living longs for, i like thinking of a free society where people get equal share like any one else. Good poem Dave. (Report) Reply

  • Chandra Thiagarajan (2/19/2013 12:28:00 AM)

    THE LAST THREE LINES MAKE THE POEM SUPERB ! Longing for peace and a free world is what all of us desire. Very nice poem! ! (Report) Reply

  • Ajay Srivastava (2/2/2013 5:45:00 AM)

    freedon is a thought.
    implemented in true color.
    result will be in favour of every one.
    need is to understand freedoom. (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilson (1/22/2013 5:31:00 AM)

    Too right Dave, guess it will be onward going, invisible chains holding on to us, and a few very visible, such is life. (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (1/22/2013 4:47:00 AM)

    Well said Dave, it used to be a free country, but it seems that our freedom is being eroded away bit by bit, and slowly but surely. (Report) Reply

  • Babatunde Aremu (1/22/2013 4:19:00 AM)

    I agree with you. Man is in chains everywhere. When shall we be free? Great write. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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