Dave Alan Walker

Silver Star - 3,684 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

A Free World - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Oh lord see me
tell me I'm still free
I see non existent chains
wrapped around me

In a world of opportunity
I thought we was free
but I have a feeling
some ones watching me

Oh lord save me
take all these eyes off of me
why is there no peace
in the land of the free

It seems to me
the only way anybody can be free
is if they are not breathing


Comments about A Free World by Dave Alan Walker

  • Rookie - 373 Points Stephen W (12/20/2013 3:51:00 PM)

    'None are so hopelessly enslaved as those who falsely believe they are free' (J. W. Von Goethe) .
    Snowden has shown that you were right. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Mohabeer Beeharry (9/7/2013 8:42:00 AM)

    The only way one can be free is to be honest about life.
    We weave to many strings
    We tell to many selfish lies just to stay on top..
    I love this writing.
    Simple, far sighted and deep.
    Congrats

    Mohabeer Beeharry

    I have just posted a poem. A touch of light
    There could be something for you there.

    Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,107 Points Geetha Jayakumar (9/6/2013 12:40:00 AM)

    Again a fantastic write.. You have concluded in a wonderful way..Loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 16 Points Julius Lenjatin (7/10/2013 7:57:00 AM)

    freedom, freedom, freedom is what every living longs for, i like thinking of a free society where people get equal share like any one else. Good poem Dave. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 95 Points Masereka Amos (7/8/2013 11:33:00 PM)

    there is nothing free indeed (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,802 Points Heather Wilkins (6/23/2013 9:17:00 PM)

    we are always being watched. someday we will be free. nice write. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 628 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (2/19/2013 12:28:00 AM)

    THE LAST THREE LINES MAKE THE POEM SUPERB ! Longing for peace and a free world is what all of us desire. Very nice poem! ! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,194 Points Unwritten Soul (2/2/2013 8:28:00 AM)

    Precious stone cant shine like this poem, you did it brighter! _Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 20 Points Ajay Srivastava (2/2/2013 5:45:00 AM)

    freedon is a thought.
    implemented in true color.
    result will be in favour of every one.
    need is to understand freedoom. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Barbara Nixon (1/31/2013 7:35:00 AM)

    Great poem, and very true. Love it! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,299 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (1/26/2013 2:14:00 AM)

    Once in a while we feel like this, particularly when we are sad! Nice poem! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,890 Points Patricia Grantham (1/25/2013 9:13:00 AM)

    Good poem Dave, Big brother isalways watching! No one is ever free. Thanks (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Eric Cockrell (1/23/2013 2:42:00 PM)

    as long as freedom is bought and sold, there can be no freedom! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Heather Wilson (1/22/2013 5:31:00 AM)

    Too right Dave, guess it will be onward going, invisible chains holding on to us, and a few very visible, such is life. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,266 Points Valerie Dohren (1/22/2013 4:47:00 AM)

    Well said Dave, it used to be a free country, but it seems that our freedom is being eroded away bit by bit, and slowly but surely. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,921 Points Babatunde Aremu (1/22/2013 4:19:00 AM)

    I agree with you. Man is in chains everywhere. When shall we be free? Great write. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 22, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, January 22, 2013


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