A Foolish Step Poem by Malaya Roses

Mislaid the same moon was the start and you convey what everybody seems to do and take a wrong step which seems in the poem to lead down the drain, a gamble fine write...regards

A great poem, like it, a great write.

such a fantastic poem for me, , , top marks

In life, it's inevitable, but may we learn from every foolish step. Food for thought. Thanks Malaya.

do not feel about lost you will gain wha you lost some day it will be yours the whole world thanks au

Just re-read your great work. Five star rating.

beautiful and imaginative writings

Your poems always touch a cord with me. Thanks for sharing.

Foolishness is the root of wrong step. A wise ride.

I think i have never commented here for any of your poem. This is our first meeting. I feel very tiny to comment on your write who is highly skilled and much talented. Here you have deeply expressed your emotions. Thanks so much. Regards.