# A Fool's Paradise- Haiku Poem by Mamta Agarwal

# A Fool's Paradise- Haiku

Rating: 2.4


Proud to be self made,
An egotist's tall claim... at work
Invisible hands.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sadiqullah Khan 07 February 2009

Yes, so true............................

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Kesav Easwaran 09 February 2009

yes; the Divine Potter's...truthfulku...10

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C. P. Sharma 11 February 2009

Yes, Invisible Hand is the string puller of the puppet show. CP

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Ranjit Ravindran 19 October 2009

invisible hands.....invisible sacrifices...invisible audience... Everything is eclipsed by ego...yet we can't survive without it. Superb ma'am. Ranjit

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Miriam Maia Padua 19 February 2009

very deep haiku... wonderful hidden meaning.... our life just like that.... leaving our fate in those invisible yet loving hands... the Great Sculptor...Great Carpenter....the Captain of our Life i like this haiku...enhance lots of meanings....

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Sathyanarayana M V S 17 February 2009

It is very much there in human nature that when he succeeds, he says it is due to his effort, when loses, throws the blame on God and fate. But man never realizes that he is a puppet in those invisible hands. Excellent poem

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Muhammad Ali 14 February 2009

haiko always attract me very nice lines dear. yes

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Vaibhav Pandey 13 February 2009

very well said ma'm......enjoyed this haiku. 10

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