A Focus On Grinning ‘no’ And ‘yeah’ Poem by sarwar chowdhury

A Focus On Grinning ‘no’ And ‘yeah’

Rating: 4.6


No…..... is not NO therefore
No……. hide the YES to extract more
No……. is evener that chance fifty-fifty
No……. is a sweet hurdle to win a kiss nifty!

No……. play a tricky role to bring the YES near
No……. become ON to get together share!

No is in nah…….. NO is in nope
No is for the time….. teensy rope of hope!

No is NO….. if things is in ‘No No’
I see dear her…. mind is in ‘so-so’!

I want to say her- come on dear hey
But sure not if she say- no no no nay!

No sometime loose NO sometime….. tight
Yes NO YES NO always in…….. fight!

The first NO I know sweeter than yeah!
Pluck me pluck me- said magnolia!

Oh what a fine effect.. look at the sight
‘Yes’ ‘No’ loving hence… come out the light!

‘Yes’ ‘No’ warring hence come out the light!
Look at the sight friends look at the sight!
Look at the sight dear look at the sight!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sonya Florentino 29 August 2009

when no means yes and yes means no, and yeah means maybe? who wouldn't go crazy? you are a comedian!

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rago rago 29 August 2009

very very nice to read........and yu have done it beautifully....

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Seema Aarella 30 August 2009

quite an interesting thesies......neatly executed! ! !

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Omar Ibrahim 30 August 2009

impressive and wonderful rhyming....fantastic keep it up..

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Bob Blackwell 30 August 2009

There can be a compromise between the No and Yes...this can bring peace. Interesting poem.

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Rehana Nazli 16 September 2009

A good sense of humour that your poem conveys. yes and no! I like how you try to play with repeatition of words in a fun way.

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Lynda Robson 02 September 2009

Good interactive piece, well composed by you, thanks 10 Lynda xx

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Shashendra Amalshan 31 August 2009

Hey cool one Sarwar! ! ! I don't know how you write these things... Very interesting to read.. You are in a league of your own! ! ! no can write these kinda stuff.. very interesting and extremely readable..10++ cheers shan

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Sanjib Das 30 August 2009

OH! WHAT A POEM. I CAN'T IMAGINE YOU WRITE SO WELL..

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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 30 August 2009

The hardest 'no' is silent. 'Pluck me pluck me - said magnolia' well..

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sarwar chowdhury

sarwar chowdhury

Origin- Bangladesh, Living abroad.
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